After showing the finished film in class we had the following feedback
Peer Feedback
-Strong Opening
-Good use of music at the beginning and the end
-Music needs to be lowered to hear the voice over
-Creative use of flash frames
Chris
-Good structured narrative
-Voiceover gets lost towards the end
-Use an indoor train sound instead of a loop track
-The music at the end substantiates more emotion than context; but this doesn't help the characterisation. In who's head is the music playing?
-Abstract style editing
-Export in 4:3 not 16:9 because of the format it was shot in.
Some of the comments made sense and gave me something to think about and change when it came to making the adjustments for the final. Other comments I disagreed with, but understood in retrospect which is better than blindly disagreeing. Overall there are some changes that need to be made.
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